11-12-2016, 01:40 AM
My revisions:
Visitor tag is uncolored.
It should be emphasized that only builders can become teachers/mods.
In the part where you list permissions, it would be best to get that kind of info from staff.
In the applying section, the student/builder sections are identical. Maybe merge them and add a note saying builders need exp and trial or something along those lines.
Might be better to wrap the IRC commands in quotes e.g. ",list".
You don't need to include the "how do we make it?" part. That's something for someone to look up on their own time.
Other than that, it looks really nice. Putting this into the "/motd" or something like that could guide visitors more easily through the application process.
Visitor tag is uncolored.
It should be emphasized that only builders can become teachers/mods.
In the part where you list permissions, it would be best to get that kind of info from staff.
In the applying section, the student/builder sections are identical. Maybe merge them and add a note saying builders need exp and trial or something along those lines.
Might be better to wrap the IRC commands in quotes e.g. ",list".
You don't need to include the "how do we make it?" part. That's something for someone to look up on their own time.
Other than that, it looks really nice. Putting this into the "/motd" or something like that could guide visitors more easily through the application process.